As a whole I like the overall layout of your magazine. However I prefer your double page spread more than the contents and front cover. Your contents page is informative but maybe a little cluttered. Overall a good start!
Overall, your contents page very informative and provides all you magazine's article clearly, however i does look slightly cluttered, so I would think about if there is anything that is not as essential to include.
Your contents page is also well presented but some of the information on their may not be needed, by getting rid of this information your contents page would look neater. well done
The colour scheme used here stands out well and adds some bright colour to another wise dark contents. The pictures are positioned well along with the text, and the title is bold and clear.
Your contents page works really well. The layout is clear yet complex in an appealing way and you have been consistent with the colour scheme. Can't find anything to fault! Great job! :)
As a whole I like the overall layout of your magazine. However I prefer your double page spread more than the contents and front cover. Your contents page is informative but maybe a little cluttered. Overall a good start!
ReplyDeleteContents looks amazing, totally gets an audience attention. The images draw you in and the text is positioned in a very professional looking way.
ReplyDeleteOverall, your contents page very informative and provides all you magazine's article clearly, however i does look slightly cluttered, so I would think about if there is anything that is not as essential to include.
ReplyDeleteYour contents page is also well presented but some of the information on their may not be needed, by getting rid of this information your contents page would look neater. well done
ReplyDeleteThe colour scheme used here stands out well and adds some bright colour to another wise dark contents. The pictures are positioned well along with the text, and the title is bold and clear.
ReplyDeleteYour contents page looks good with the colour scheme, however it seems slightly cluttered which makes it a tad messy. Maybe have less text?
ReplyDeleteYour contents page works really well. The layout is clear yet complex in an appealing way and you have been consistent with the colour scheme. Can't find anything to fault! Great job! :)
ReplyDeleteI like your layout it is simple but effective. Your theme is consistent which is great
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