Love the layout of your double page spread, the image on the left hand side is very affective and caught my attention immediately. The article is very well written so I'd say a job well done !
I really like the layout of this double page spread, I believe that It actually looks like an actual magazine double page spread. the layout of this DPS is well positioned and proportioned. all round a good double page spread !
I think your double page spread looks great. The layout follows the style of a professional magazine and is well measured so everything looks neat. Good Job!
I really like the layout of the magazine, the contrast of colours has been very well done and the images look great. Double page look incredible and super professional, nice work libby!
This is a really good double page spread. You have stuck to the same colour scheme throughout and this makes your magazine look professional. Can not fault your double page spread, well done
I love this Libby! The layout is clean and professional and your research behind the magazine industry comes through when looking at this and the inspiration matches. Can't fault this, well done!
Your magazine is very good overall. I would change the masthead of your front cover as there is quite a lot of blank space. You could achieve this by making your image bigger or making your title or a bigger font size. For your double page spread I would change the main image on the page so that the person is in the middle of that section as this would be more eye catching for the reader. Not many changes needed, good job.
The magazine looks great, and I like how you've interpreted the colour red throughout the magazine. The double page spread is laid out well and the photo is very clear, the quote on the photo is very bold and can easily be seen and overall the whole magazine is very clean and tidy. For the photo on the double page spread I think that it should be more focused around your artist and the branch is obscuring the view of him. However, the photo does fit your genre as it is very obscure and original. Good job.
I really like this spread as it looks different and uses great attractive colours. Your article is well written, interesting and overall a great job. Well done- keep up the good work!!!
The magazine is very good, i love the colour code that you've gone with as it tells me so much about the subject of the article. I like how everything is neatly set out, as it gives it such a professional look and style. There's not much I'd really say that needs to be changed. Well done!
I love the look of your double page. Again the colour scheme is carried throughout and the layout is clear and appealing. The article is very well written and the image works with the magazine. Job well done! :)
Really good draft magazine, the colour scheme, layout of the pages works really well for your genre. The pages are all consistent and work really well together, you could consider making the image bigger on the front cover as there is some empty space. Very good draft article, well done!
This is a very good draft magazine, I like the way you have kept the design and colour scheme consistent throughout. The photos you have used are also very effective and you have used a variety of different backgrounds which is really good. Well done!
this is a very good magazine draft. the images, text and colour scheme represent perfectly your intended genre of magazine. the only main room for improvemnt in my opinion is that the image on the oduble page spread be changed so the branch is not obstructing the view of the perosn as it takes the focus slightly away from him. well done :)
Love the layout of your double page spread, the image on the left hand side is very affective and caught my attention immediately. The article is very well written so I'd say a job well done !
ReplyDeleteI really like the layout of this double page spread, I believe that It actually looks like an actual magazine double page spread. the layout of this DPS is well positioned and proportioned. all round a good double page spread !
ReplyDeleteI think your double page spread looks great. The layout follows the style of a professional magazine and is well measured so everything looks neat. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteI really like the layout of the magazine, the contrast of colours has been very well done and the images look great. Double page look incredible and super professional, nice work libby!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good double page spread. You have stuck to the same colour scheme throughout and this makes your magazine look professional. Can not fault your double page spread, well done
ReplyDeletethe overall layout of your magazine is very well designed. i like the photos which you have used and i like the colour schemes used aswell.
ReplyDeletethe overall layout of your magazine is very well designed. i like the photos which you have used and i like the colour schemes used aswell.
ReplyDeleteI love this Libby! The layout is clean and professional and your research behind the magazine industry comes through when looking at this and the inspiration matches. Can't fault this, well done!
ReplyDeleteYour magazine is very good overall. I would change the masthead of your front cover as there is quite a lot of blank space. You could achieve this by making your image bigger or making your title or a bigger font size. For your double page spread I would change the main image on the page so that the person is in the middle of that section as this would be more eye catching for the reader. Not many changes needed, good job.
ReplyDeleteThe magazine looks great, and I like how you've interpreted the colour red throughout the magazine. The double page spread is laid out well and the photo is very clear, the quote on the photo is very bold and can easily be seen and overall the whole magazine is very clean and tidy. For the photo on the double page spread I think that it should be more focused around your artist and the branch is obscuring the view of him. However, the photo does fit your genre as it is very obscure and original. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI really like this spread as it looks different and uses great attractive colours. Your article is well written, interesting and overall a great job. Well done- keep up the good work!!!
ReplyDeleteThe magazine is very good, i love the colour code that you've gone with as it tells me so much about the subject of the article. I like how everything is neatly set out, as it gives it such a professional look and style. There's not much I'd really say that needs to be changed. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI love the look of your double page. Again the colour scheme is carried throughout and the layout is clear and appealing. The article is very well written and the image works with the magazine. Job well done! :)
ReplyDeletei really like this. the theme and genre is very consistent. in all fairness i think the whole magazine is amazing in a whole
ReplyDeletei really like this. the theme and genre is very consistent. in all fairness i think the whole magazine is amazing in a whole
ReplyDeleteReally good draft magazine, the colour scheme, layout of the pages works really well for your genre. The pages are all consistent and work really well together, you could consider making the image bigger on the front cover as there is some empty space. Very good draft article, well done!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good draft magazine, I like the way you have kept the design and colour scheme consistent throughout. The photos you have used are also very effective and you have used a variety of different backgrounds which is really good. Well done!
ReplyDeletethis is a very good magazine draft. the images, text and colour scheme represent perfectly your intended genre of magazine. the only main room for improvemnt in my opinion is that the image on the oduble page spread be changed so the branch is not obstructing the view of the perosn as it takes the focus slightly away from him. well done :)
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